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Wednesday, April 9, 2025
Writing the Future: Three Lessons I’ll Carry into My Classroom
Friday, April 4, 2025
Exploring Our Guilty Pleasures Through Creative Writing
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Friday, March 14, 2025
Blood Moon: Blackout Poetry
Don't worry,
another chance,
a stunning event.
The "blood moon" amazed,
the moon and sun opposite.
A partial eclipse,
twice a year,
a shadow falls.
"Blood moon,"
red when covered by the Earth's shadow.
The moon,
a period of darkness.
My blackout poem, "Blood Moon," has been drawn from a newspaper article I found about the lunar eclipse we experienced last night. My goal in writing this piece was to challenge myself by writing a new piece of work within an existing piece. What I hope you can take away from this method of poetry is to read closely and try to be creative when attempting to write your own blackout poetry. It's okay if your piece doesn't make sense to everyone. The goal of this exercise is to find what sticks out to you and make a piece of writing out of it. I thought this process was a little challenging because it was hard at first to imagine the page blacked out with only a few select words remaining. However, as I started blacking out some words, the poem started to come to me the more I read. I thought this was a nice and engaging way to get excited about poetry since it's the one English related topic that I'm not normally interested in. I think this would make a really fun activity in any English classroom!
Wednesday, March 5, 2025
Inspiring Writing Through Poetry
Poetry is a powerful art form that can be used to express and even explore different emotions. I choose Jim Daniels's American Cheese (Poem 028) and Cecilia Woloch's Slow Children at Play (Poem 112) to help inspire writing. The two poems are presented in a light-hearted story telling approach through poetry, which is why I think they are a perfect example to show any students. Poetry seems to be a daunting idea for many students whenever it is mentioned. So, showing them examples of how poetry can be fun is a good way to get your students excited to engage in writing their own poetry.
Daniel's poem does a good job of selecting a topic, American cheese, and using it to express emotions through storytelling. This poem can be inspiring for young writers as it showcases how personal experiences, even something as small as cheese, can hold a deep meaning and transform into wonderful poetry. Daniel's poem is a good way to showcase how powerful exploring memory, identity, or even family can be in evoking emotion through imagery. This poem is a wonderful example of how writers can capture complex emotions in simple, everyday moments.
On the other hand, Woloch's poem does a nice job of inspiring writers by creating a sense of nostalgia. The poem uses the example of rushing adults and slow children to explore the complexities of relationships and moments. Through the use of imagery and rhythm, this poem invites readers to capture the fleeting moments in life that typically go unnoticed.
My hope in showing students these poems is that the typical feeling of nerves and dread regarding poetry can be lifted off their shoulders. Poetry doesn't always have to be a difficult puzzle that must be constructed when writing and understanding it. It is possible to express and explore emotions through poetry without all the complexities. By showing these poems to students, I hope it can show them that poetry is what you make it and it's not something they should be afraid to write and explore on their own.
Here is a link to the website where you can access the below poems and many more!
https://www.loc.gov/programs/poetry-and-literature/poet-laureate/poet-laureate-projects/poetry-180/all-poems/
Poem 028: American Cheese
At department parties, I eat cheese
my parents never heard of—gooey
pale cheeses speaking garbled tongues.
I have acquired a taste, yes, and that's
okay, I tell myself. I grew up in a house
shaded by the factory's clank and clamor.
A house built like a square of sixty-four
American Singles, the ones my mother made lunches
With—for the hungry man who disappeared
into that factory, and five hungry kids.
American Singles. Yellow mustard. Day-old
Wonder Bread. Not even Swiss, with its mysterious
holes. We were sparrows and starlings
still learning how the blue jay stole our eggs,
our nest eggs. Sixty-four Singles wrapped in wax—
dig your nails in to separate them.
When I come home, I crave—more than any home
cooking—those thin slices in the fridge. I fold
one in half, drop it in my mouth. My mother
can't understand. Doesn't remember me
being a cheese eater, plain like that. —Jim Daniels
Poem 112: Slow Children at Play
All the quick children have gone inside, called
by their mothers to hurry-up-wash-your-hands
honey-dinner’s-getting-cold, just-wait-till-your-father-gets-home-
and only the slow children out on the lawns, marking off
paths between fireflies, making soft little sounds with their mouths,
ohs, that glow and go out and glow. And their slow mothers flickering,
pale in the dusk, watching them turn in the gentle air, watching them
twirling, their arms spread wide, thinking, These are my children,
thinking, Where is their dinner? Where has their father gone?—Cecilia Woloch
Thursday, February 20, 2025
Putting on the Shoes of a Teacher: Lesson Plan 1 Reflection
Brief Assignment Introduction
In this post, I will be discussing our class's most recent assignment, a lesson plan. This assignment tasked us with creating a lesson plan revolving around argumentative writing. We were asked to find standards, create student learning objectives/goals, write an opening script, as well as create a model of the assignment for student clarification. Once completed, we were then in charge of presenting our lesson to small groups, consisting of our peers, to gain some practice with teaching and receiving feedback.
Reflecting On My Own Lesson
Reflecting On My Experience as a Learner
Diving Deeper Into One Lesson
Friday, February 14, 2025
Harnessing the Power of Workshops and Temporal Landmarks to Fuel Student Growth
Wednesday, February 5, 2025
Fostering Better Writers Through Workshops
Another way writing workshops are crucial in building better writers is through the status of the class checks. These checks, which are very flexible and only need to occur every once in a while, help keep students and teachers on track. With writing workshops, every student is welcome to go at their own pace. Status of the class checks are also beneficial for both the teacher and student as they allow progress checks and can encourage time management skills for students who want to set goals for themselves and their writing. These moments are also vital in building a sense of community in the classroom since students will be interested in where their peers are in their writing, motivating students to continue their own work.
Writing workshops are also crucial in building better writers through sharing with an audience, whether that's with peers or the teacher. Students tend to really value their peer's opinions, sometimes even more than the teacher's. No writer is going to improve their writing without receiving feedback, whether it's good or bad. Hearing different perspectives and ideas is imperative in building better writers as it opens the door for new ideas, possibilities, and improvements. Ultimately, writing workshops are critical in building better writers because they allow, "Students spend less time on worksheets, fill-ins, repetitive drill work, and other sub-skills of writing. They spend more time applying what they've learned authentically. They spend time writing and sharing-- two things they enjoy--instead of doing things they find boring and meaningless" (Peha, 1995-2010). When students are allowed to apply what they've learned in an authentic way rather than worrying about a test or worksheet, they are more likely to absorb the knowledge and use it more organically in future writing. Based on your knowledge of writer workshops, do you find them to be crucial in building better writers?
Sources: Peha, S. (1995-2010). Welcome to Writer's Workshop. Teaching That Makes Sense, Inc. https://ttms.box.net/shared/static/18htc7rcb2.pdf
Thursday, January 23, 2025
Welcome!
Welcome to my blog! My name is Jody, and I am currently a junior at Montclair State University. I am studying English, as well as Secondary Education! Here is a place where I will reflect on my thoughts about learning how to teach writing! I hope you enjoy reading my posts throughout the semester!
Writing the Future: Three Lessons I’ll Carry into My Classroom
Introduction: In our semester-long project, we were tasked with reading articles from various sources regarding both teaching writi...
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Lesson Overview: This week I had the opportunity to present my final teaching demo to my entire class. Creating my lesson, "Gu...
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"Blood Moon" Don't worry, another chance, a stunning event. The "blood moon" amazed, the moon and sun opposite. A p...
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Introduction: In our semester-long project, we were tasked with reading articles from various sources regarding both teaching writi...

